Calm down please, Olivia. I don't mean to be rude, but this thread is for competition-related comments only, not poems.
Post this poem at the "CRITICS" section of the forum, and I'm sure you will get some feedback.
o sorri umm i wasnt being anxious or anything i just said is something i didnt get so yeah and if u look back at the forth i must have seen somebody signature poem and not a post im sorry i forgive i was wrong
