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« on: November 01, 2007, 02:29:23 pm »
I think I'll enter this competition too for once. It interests me for sure. Not sure about ideas yet, I'll get back once I've mulled over the options some more.  Smiley
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« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2007, 12:03:56 pm »
First Draft is up. Remember, this is not final, I might make some adjustments to it later. Hope anybody who chooses to read it enjoys it.  Smiley
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« Reply #2 on: November 21, 2007, 06:18:39 pm »
Touching, thought-provoking and VERY sci-fi - very Kif.  Good stuff, man - I couldn't see many flaws worth changing.
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« Reply #3 on: December 02, 2007, 02:13:47 pm »
Okay, final version is ready now. Enjoy!  Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: December 02, 2007, 07:42:32 pm »
Typoes: "Fry is not only being send"; and "his rather said" EDIT: Fixed now.

Excellent (and scary) plot, clever title, and just generally very good use of the characters and the story elements. I was especially happy to see
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I'm just a man, I'm not a hero
I'm just a boy who had to sing this song
I'm just a man, I'm not a hero
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We'll carry on
We'll carry on
Though you're dead and gone, believe me
Your memory will carry on
We'll carry on
And though you're broken and defeated
Your weary widow marches on.

- My Chemical Romance, "Welcome to the Black Parade"

Current status report: polishing up this thing
Word count: about 7000 words too much
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