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« on: November 19, 2006, 10:34:38 pm »
This is Generations 2.5, the 'bridge' between 2 and 3:
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« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2006, 02:09:13 am »
... well.

Thats mighty fine consistent work. Your good at portraying characters in very difficult poses, or drawing them consistent to a point of veiw or 'camera angle'.

All in all, looks interesting and climatic Smiley Keeps me wonderings 'Whats gunna happen now?'
Good good!
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« Reply #2 on: November 26, 2006, 01:50:26 pm »
Quote from: Casper on November 25, 2006, 02:09:13 am
... well.

Thats mighty fine consistent work. Your good at portraying characters in very difficult poses, or drawing them consistent to a point of veiw or 'camera angle'.

All in all, looks interesting and climatic Smiley Keeps me wonderings 'Whats gunna happen now?'
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I'm glad you like it!  This page was going to be in part 2.5, but it's going to be in the beginings of part 3, which I'm starting today:
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« Reply #3 on: December 02, 2006, 02:34:53 am »
Quick sketch of a small sampling of charcters in part 3:
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« Reply #4 on: December 02, 2006, 02:06:06 pm »
Hm...the Maggies' sizes seem off; if present-Maggie stood up she'd be as tall as the others, and if future-Maggie's 13, she should be taller than the other kids.

Speaking of which, Gina looks...I dunno, bigger than she should, unless she's actually closer to us than everyone else. Burns's nose doesn't seem pointy enough, and Bart's pupils are too small...though given his expression, that may have been intentional.

And one last question: What in the hell is Springfield putting in the water to produce kids like future-Maggie and this new guy?

Edit: One more thing I just noticed: The adults look much shorter than they should.
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« Reply #5 on: December 02, 2006, 02:09:44 pm »
Oh, J2, so you're the Jake Lennington I've heard so much about. I've been reading this comic on your site, and I am glad you haven't stopped making it! Smiley
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« Reply #6 on: December 10, 2006, 08:21:40 pm »
After reading through this gem I've decided to share my opinion on the artistic aspect of your work.

You've done a fine job drawing most of the characters(especially C.B.G. and Timothy Lovejoy who are seldom, if at all represented in fanart) but you need to work on some of the others,namely Sherri, Terri (their heads are a *bit* too small, there doesn't seem to be enough space between the nose and upper lip) and Moe (I can't quite put my finger on whats wrong with Moe, he just looks a bit off IMO)

I'll comment on the story some other time but so far I'm really getting into "Simpsons Generations", very nice work!
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