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Maggie says: "Dang it! I suck in anatomy"
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« on: September 11, 2007, 04:11:18 pm » |
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I did this before going to bed yesterday, at 3 am. lol. I'm becoming internet addicted again.  Concrit is welcome |
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« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2007, 04:53:32 pm » |
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Awww... I wonder what happened to her this time.
In terms of actual crit; I may be wrong but lisa seems to be...not wide enough (unless she's older or malnourished). Also from what I've seen there seems to be a hell of alot of sad Lisa pics (again, I could be wrong), meaning this pic is a teensy bit typical.
On a more positive note note, other than what I'd mentioned she's actually on model (to the best of my knowledge), the scenery looks nice and the colour inversion conveys the mood superbly. obviously the pros greatly outweigh the cons and it's definately a well done piece of art so I'm sorry if this post came off as harsh or negative.
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« Reply #2 on: September 11, 2007, 05:05:09 pm » |
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Of course not, Tyranus. I know is a sad pic, but heck I just wanted to do something for a friend and posted it here anyway.  But if you want something funny, here you go...... *On the side note, yes, Lisa is a bit older, around 12 is how old I tried to make her look |
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« Reply #3 on: September 11, 2007, 05:19:02 pm » |
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Hi Omar! Welcome back to the dark s-- uh, Internet. We have cookies.Feelin' Blue -- I like Lisa's expressive pose here, and the interesting angle. Far as crit goes: it looks like she's not quite sitting on the jetty, and her necklace doesn't line up with her neck. Nice details, though, like the dripping feet and the round-eyed little fish. Are you planning to colour this one? The negative-image effect makes me wonder what it would look like shaded in black and white. Also from what I've seen there seems to be a hell of alot of sad Lisa pics LISA: I'm weeping for the appalling state of Springfield's inland waterways! FISH: So you should. That luminous green stuff lowered my IQ. |
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« Reply #4 on: September 11, 2007, 05:23:04 pm » |
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Yeah, Thats a mistake that flew in front of my eyes, it looks like she is floating. Well, anyways, I'm not planning to color it, but probably a just white shading would be nice as correcting that mistake you mentioned. Thanks! |
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« Reply #5 on: September 12, 2007, 03:29:02 pm » |
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Yay, new omar stuff I was going to concrit lisa's construction in the first picture, until you mentioned you were aiming to make her look a bit older, so that explains that. So slightly floating look aside, i think its the best of the three. The Maggie picture is hard to critique as we've seen so little of her in flash forward episodes. her thighs may be a tad thick, but that's all I've got Heretical a thought as it might be, while the first looks better, I think my favourite one here is the picture of bart. There's just something endearing and amusing about his expresion in the context.  |
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« Reply #6 on: September 12, 2007, 05:07:55 pm » |
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I agree with Pat. Plus, I can't help but hear the Rocky theme whenever I look at it... I'll leave it to more articulate artists to offer their crit. |
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« Reply #7 on: May 28, 2008, 05:21:37 am » |
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more art using white on black. I love drawing with white on black. |
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