Cut-out Terri: looks good, with an interesting style. The only thing I don't like about it is the texture (?) you've used on the back part of her hair. It's kind of distracting.
First doodle: some of this is very good. I particularly like the girl in glasses, and the one shouting at you. Very on-model, and funny!
Second doodle: Also funny and well-drawn. I have no negative criticism. The legs are a bit different from on the show, but since you're using your own style, that's OK.
Great work. Made me smile.
June, she'll change her tune.
In restless walks she'll prowl the night.
July, she will fly,
And give no warning to her flight.
- Simon & Garfunkel, "April, Come She Will"
Rest in peace Terry Pratchett, 1948-2015.
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