It's That Girl!
Looks on-model and in character, though a long version of That Guy's hairstyle feels a bit weird. Maybe you should have given her some equivalently sleazy female hairstyle instead. But that's a very, very minor nitpick. I liked the character, and this is a good picture.
(Also, I admire the fact that you found out his actual name.)
One-track mind, one-track heart.
If I fail I'll fall apart.
Maybe this is all a test
'Cause I feel like I'm the worst, so I always act like I'm the best.
- Marina and the Diamonds, "Oh No"
Rest in peace Terry Pratchett, 1948-2015
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