It's That Girl!
Looks on-model and in character, though a long version of That Guy's hairstyle feels a bit weird. Maybe you should have given her some equivalently sleazy female hairstyle instead. But that's a very, very minor nitpick. I liked the character, and this is a good picture.
(Also, I admire the fact that you found out his actual name.)
June, she'll change her tune.
In restless walks she'll prowl the night.
July, she will fly,
And give no warning to her flight.
- Simon & Garfunkel, "April, Come She Will"
Rest in peace Terry Pratchett, 1948-2015.
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