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Author Topic: REVIEW: Dial "N" for Nerder  (Read 185 times)
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« on: March 10, 2008, 01:28:58 am »

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I can recite it right now and have you ROTFLOL
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« Reply #1 on: March 12, 2008, 04:57:27 pm »

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Letter Grade: B-, with points off for what's pointed out above.
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« Reply #2 on: March 20, 2008, 04:03:42 am »

 Shocked Um... How do I start... Well, the Homer/Marge subplot initially had a good premise but started to lag somewhere round the final scenes (especially round that 'Homer eating cake' scenario and the reality producer finally) Betsy Higgins was a funny character and so was Homer's obession with *spoiler tag* Bell peppers* (I need to find out how to do spoiler tags, can someone teach me??  D'oh!)

But is it just me or did the voices sound a bit different, Marge sounded a little High-pitched in this episode (the voice-actoress?)
The second main plot was a bit disturbing to me, especially the bit where (spoiler) Lisa tries to cover up that she was an accomplice.
The act seems a bit OOC to me and didn't really suit Lisa's personality.
(spoler) Nice job with the recorder though!
Bart: I thought you turned it off.
'Congratulations on purchasing a Non reversible tape' LOL

I thought the ending was a bit cliche though, what was with Nelson talking to the 'audience' ending?? I get annoyed with that sort of '4th wall' ending.
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« Reply #3 on: March 20, 2008, 11:49:33 am »

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