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Author Topic: REVIEW: Smoke on the Daughter  (Read 297 times)
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« on: March 31, 2008, 01:24:29 am »

Uh... Hmm...

...Yeah.

At least we got a good showing from Homer in act 3.
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« Reply #1 on: March 31, 2008, 10:05:23 am »

Come on! I'm probably never going to watch this episode anyway, so why can't I hear how bad it sucked? 
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« Reply #2 on: March 31, 2008, 12:52:21 pm »

Any redeeming features at all?
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« Reply #3 on: March 31, 2008, 01:08:55 pm »

The problem is that it didn't suck at all. It had a lot of funny moments.

But basing myself on the title, I was expecting a plot about Selma having to quit smoking for Ling before I started watching the episode
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« Reply #4 on: March 31, 2008, 01:16:12 pm »

See, now that would have been a good story.
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« Reply #5 on: March 31, 2008, 02:05:44 pm »

Any redeeming features at all?

Well, there were some funny moments as Mattee said (and some drawn-out unfunny ones), but the overall plot was kind of blah. The potential was there, but it wasn't used to its fullest.

But like I said, the high point for me was Homer in act 3.

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« Reply #6 on: March 31, 2008, 03:20:58 pm »

See, now that would have been a good story.

It would actually have been a *story*, not just something thrown together on a plot generator.
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« Reply #7 on: April 01, 2008, 04:01:15 am »

This one road the line between decent and awful for me:

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Final Rating: B+  Fast forward through the horrible B-Plot.  Can we hope that the fact that ratings for this (and family guy) sliding slowly into the 7. range stateside might mean something?

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« Reply #8 on: April 02, 2008, 07:08:52 pm »

I take it the Russian ballet teacher from "Homer vs. Patty and Selma" wasn't in this...
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« Reply #9 on: April 02, 2008, 07:26:49 pm »

Nope - continuity takes another dirtnap in this ep.
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« Reply #10 on: April 02, 2008, 11:50:27 pm »

Nope - continuity takes another dirtnap in this ep.

Considering the episode opened with a big nod to the Harry Potter spoof from a season or so back, that's a bit harsh.
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« Reply #11 on: April 03, 2008, 01:09:38 am »

Ahh, good point!  D'oh!  Sorry, SD.  The ep does have some nice continuity, which has been pointed out.

I liked the Fossey-type teacher though, Chris - he's a nice addition.
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