For example, here's a picture I was originally going to enter for the contest (I've since decided I'm going to draw something else altogether if I have the time). Please ignore the fact that Fry's off-model, that I can't draw hands for beans, and all the other nuiances that are probably lurking in this picture.

(...That's a pillow under her nightgown. There was a story to go along with this picture, but... yeah. There's a reason I'm not entering this.)
I feel like I'm not fully getting across the emotion I'm trying to portray here, and that much of that is because of the body language (or lack thereof). Or maybe I'm just seeing things; perhaps this picture isn't the best example of what I'm trying to describe, but I had the sketch handy, and I thought an example would help.
Regardless, the stiffness of my drawings is something I've been struggling with for years now, and I'd like to try and conquer it sooner than later. Any thoughts?


