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« on: August 12, 2007, 11:22:38 pm » |
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Due to popular, insistent demand I've started this thread as a place for any drawings I do. Here's one! Nephilim Infantry |
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« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2007, 12:19:21 pm » |
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This is definitely an improvement: the pose is dynamic and you are certainly getting your own distinctive style (I like her eyes). Body proportions are good, as far as I can tell. I'm happy that you put in a background that provides a bit of story. Interesting space suit, nicely unusual gun shape. The inking is good.
I'll leave the constructive criticism to those who know more about art than I. I have some problems with the shape of her right shoe, but then I don't really know what they are supposed to look like. Her hands are good (not perfect, probably, but fully adequate to me), but her left thumb looks too short compared to the fingers.
Keep it up! I for one like seeing your offtopic art.
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« Reply #2 on: September 17, 2007, 03:28:51 pm » |
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« Reply #3 on: September 17, 2007, 04:56:08 pm » |
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Heh heh, for rampant cheesecake, this isn't so bad.  She's quite cute. I like her pose and tail (and the one fang). The hair and wings are well done, too, and the position of her feet. However, your characters still look a bit stiff - I think it's the joints, they're rather too angular. Also, on most people, the lower legs are pretty much as long as the thighs. (Not on me, but that's because I'm weird.) Short and very critical post due to me working at the moment. Don't get me wrong, I like this picture more than most. Is it "Disgaea"-inspired? |
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I've shined your shoes,
Moved your mountains and marked your cards.
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Or else your hearts must have the courage
For the Changing of the Guards."
- Bob Dylan, "The Changing of the Guards"
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« Reply #4 on: July 01, 2008, 12:11:00 am » |
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So I guess I might as well bring this topic back to life. Those who were in chat already saw this, this is the shaded and coloured version of the main characters. Average Schoolgirls (in animé, always a filthy lie)Still to do - the passer-by, and the background. |
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« Reply #5 on: July 02, 2008, 12:15:48 am » |
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« Reply #6 on: July 02, 2008, 10:25:30 pm » |
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I happen to think it's a very good background. It's not distracting from the main focus of the image but it's detailed enough to be there without throwing the viewer out of the picture. |
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« Reply #7 on: July 06, 2008, 09:42:55 pm » |
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I don't think the background is crappy. It's nice and fulfils its purpose.
I've told you this already, but the characters are good. I particularly like the centaur, as you know, but the catgirl and giantess are great, too. (And the ordinary guy just walking past is a hilarious touch.)
I can still see definite improvement in your art. Keep it up.
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"Gentlemen", he said,
"I don't need your organisation
I've shined your shoes,
Moved your mountains and marked your cards.
But Eden is burning
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Or else your hearts must have the courage
For the Changing of the Guards."
- Bob Dylan, "The Changing of the Guards"
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